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You have included some great information and your investigation was clear.
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You did mention every task you were giving to do and you also did add pictures/ spider diagrams which did help me know what you were talking about and what sports gear you wanted to investigate. You also did investigate the different types of advertisements and you did mention the advantages and disadvantages.
Your planning was clear and all your work was finished properly! GOOD JOB :D
For improvements, you can add some more pictures that can make your blog more catchy to read!
-Safa Seddougui
9dd
good infomashion, your infomashion was clear but you could but more diagrams you can add some more pitchers for some more effect. but all together realy good work.
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